I just finished looking at this weeks readings. Both essays really impressed me and the piece on Description very informative. I particularly liked the essay, “A Fable for Tomorrow”. It painted a vivid picture in my mind of everything that was going on in the town. I heard the noises of the animals and children playing, and then after illness stuck the town I heard nothing. I really enjoyed using all me senses at the begging of the essay to put together the town that she was describing. It almost reminded me of the small town I live in, except my town is more modren than what I picture hers to be. I wish that the town stayed happy and pretty throughout the essay.
Posted by: tlewis1016 | October 13, 2009
Seeing, Hearing, Tasteing, Feeling Sentences
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